within this moment
there is only
moonlight and us
and you spin, spin, spin me
with woven crowns
of starlit violets
the ballerina and the prince
and you spin, spin, spin me
upon summer's last breath
a whispered plea
one more warm midnight
and you spin, spin, spin me
into the darkness
we dance a path of light
our happy ever after
and you spin, spin, spin me
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
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Smooth, romantic lines that create a clear a scene. Great one shot!
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How beautiful Jenna!! your words caress the soul..i love this romance you picture marvelously..very sweet one shot darling..:)
ReplyDeleteah this is beautiful i love to dance so gently with my wife...
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, makes me want to dance around.
ReplyDeleteMy poem is here.
Awww what a lyrical dance with a prince and a princess
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing with One Shot
moon Smiles
oh..so lovely! It was like a song, and I almost danced to it! But hubby's asleep, so didn't wanna dance to this love song all alone :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a fabulous poem, Jenna... keep it up!!!
Thanks for taking me for a spin!
ReplyDelete(Ooh! I'm gettin' dizzy!)
Oh those beautiful pirouettes - of Pierrot and Pierrette..Turning, swaying, spinning through life. Beautiful. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful sweet poem!
ReplyDeletethat was a beautiful dance..thankyou...pete
ReplyDeletenice rhythm...to this piece...bkm
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