Wednesday, August 25, 2010

One Shot Wednesday

within this moment
there is only
moonlight and us
and you spin, spin, spin me

with woven crowns
of starlit violets
the ballerina and the prince
and you spin, spin, spin me

upon summer's last breath
a whispered plea
one more warm midnight
and you spin, spin, spin me

into the darkness
we dance a path of light
our happy ever after
and you spin, spin, spin me

12 comments:

  1. Smooth, romantic lines that create a clear a scene. Great one shot!
    Cheers

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  2. How beautiful Jenna!! your words caress the soul..i love this romance you picture marvelously..very sweet one shot darling..:)

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  3. ah this is beautiful i love to dance so gently with my wife...

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  4. This is beautiful, makes me want to dance around.

    My poem is here.

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  5. Awww what a lyrical dance with a prince and a princess

    thanks for sharing with One Shot

    moon Smiles

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  6. oh..so lovely! It was like a song, and I almost danced to it! But hubby's asleep, so didn't wanna dance to this love song all alone :)

    Such a fabulous poem, Jenna... keep it up!!!

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  7. Thanks for taking me for a spin!

    (Ooh! I'm gettin' dizzy!)

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  8. Oh those beautiful pirouettes - of Pierrot and Pierrette..Turning, swaying, spinning through life. Beautiful. Thank you.

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  9. that was a beautiful dance..thankyou...pete

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