Thursday, July 15, 2010

Three Word Wednesday

gentle, praise, vulgar

vulgar intruder
upon an indigo night
i commit trespass
against gentle applause
of wind and willow
as fireflies dance
an aerial ballet
in praise of
starlit demigods
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5 comments:

  1. Thom GabrukiewiczJuly 15, 2010 at 12:46 PM

    such lovely descriptions in this. In my mind's eye, the scene unfolds.

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  2. Dee MartinJuly 15, 2010 at 3:51 PM

    this is so beautiful - I can see the fireflies!

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  3. Thomma LynJuly 15, 2010 at 4:13 PM

    Oooh, so beautiful -- I love fireflies, and how apt to describe their flight as "aerial ballet."

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  4. JeevesJuly 18, 2010 at 8:57 AM

    I just love the image and the words that flow....

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  5. JennaJuly 19, 2010 at 6:48 PM

    Much appreciation and thanks for the kind words. I've been finding much writing inspiration in these red wine summer nights. ;-)

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