Tuesday, July 27, 2010

One Shot Wednesday

essence of night
found within
the darkness
of your absence
i take the moon
as my lover
and whisper your name
when his light
touches my skin
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20 comments:

  1. Steven Marty GrantJuly 27, 2010 at 6:38 PM

    Perfect little jewel of a poem, very well done

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  2. Brian MillerJuly 27, 2010 at 6:53 PM

    that was hot...whisper your name...nice write. and thanks for linking up with one shot!

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  3. AnonymousJuly 27, 2010 at 7:11 PM

    Awesome..I liked the line "I take the moon
    as my lover"...very passionate, full of emotion..I loved it!! Thanks for sharing ~ Amanda

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  4. dustusJuly 27, 2010 at 8:01 PM

    Enjoyed reading your post—poignant poem about loss. Thanks for posting this!

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  5. signed...bkmJuly 27, 2010 at 8:19 PM

    lovely piece...bkm

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  6. desk49July 27, 2010 at 10:32 PM

    At Night time when found without a lover
    Exchanged with moon through window shudders
    when it touches my skin I moan and shudder
    At night when I'm found without my lover

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  7. desk49July 27, 2010 at 10:35 PM

    Simple yet meaningful
    My hat is off to you

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  8. TALONJuly 27, 2010 at 10:51 PM

    This was lovely!

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  9. Rinkly RimesJuly 27, 2010 at 11:56 PM

    'I take the moon as my lover'......what a lovely phrase.

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  10. UnknownJuly 28, 2010 at 1:11 AM

    Very soulful, rather forlorn but beautiful

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  11. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 5:20 AM

    The heart wants what it wants... and sometimes cannot have. Beautiful. :)

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  12. John (@bookdreamer)July 28, 2010 at 7:10 AM

    Sensual moment of loneliness. I do poetry for fun rather than publication so for this week only, I’ve nervously posted an example from each of my blogs: an Elegy from Scribbles and Diversions, a Gogyohka from Random Twitter Stories, and free verse poem from Random Short Stories.

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  13. JessieJuly 28, 2010 at 7:18 AM

    longing and lonliness...

    very nice.

    smiles,

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  14. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 7:48 AM

    Beautifully written. I like this very much, from night to its sweet glow, nice!

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  15. RajlakshmiJuly 28, 2010 at 10:11 AM

    beautiful imagery... loved it...

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  16. JennaJuly 28, 2010 at 1:33 PM

    Many, many, many thanks for all the comments and compliments! I am so excited to have discovered One Shot and am having a blast reading everyone's writing. Cheers! :-)

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  17. PattiKenJuly 28, 2010 at 1:39 PM

    This is a lovely little poem, capturing the loneliness perfectly.

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  18. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 2:23 PM

    Oh wowwww... this was sooo romantic! I got goosebumps..
    Loved the picture you've painted with your lovely words.. :)

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  19. joannaJuly 28, 2010 at 9:17 PM

    Love this poem, short sweet and an enchanting quality.

    Joanny

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  20. MarshyAugust 1, 2010 at 2:31 PM

    a sensual hot poem...been away for a week and am catching up..thanks for linking in with One Shot..cheers Pete

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