acrid, bane, tepid
with my love
i will heal
the acrid void
where your heart
should be
with my touch
i will heat
your tepid blood
to match
my passion
and with this kiss
i will breathe
belief into you
and banish
the bane within
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this works on so many levels. I really like the structure, the flow, the vibe.
ReplyDeletewow !!! this was a good one .. and also for finding you here :)
ReplyDeletelove your tweets already !!
nimue
I really like the pace of this poem; each stanza being the same number of lines, the nice change in number of syllables on a line all moving you forward. Good work.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the positive remarks! I look forward to sharing Wednesday words with you all. :-)
ReplyDelete*waves* to nimue <3
Loved what you did with these prompt words - it all flows together.
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